Kimberly+H

CLIENT- MALE TARGET AUCIENCE

PRODUCT- OIL OF OLAY FACE CREAMS

CURRENT ADVERTISEMENTS

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BLOG 7- SATURDAY, 22ND SEPTEMBER 2010

Today, was the easiest part of my assessment. It was really easy as I decided to make my my poster all about having a rockstar life and having girls fall over their heels for him. The poster was the funnest part as I added a pun by writing, ' He's got the Olay, Do you have the Olay?'. This was really easy to figure out because their are millions of men that are wanting to look better. They sometimes take care of themselves more than women. I realised and found statistics that men are caring more and more about their looks and that they would try anything to attract women. Finally, I had printed off all of my work and relaxed for a day or two. It was really cool because I had time to study for all of the exams. This was especially becasue I had to study language techniques, After the first death, etc. I did this by studying the SST's, in which included, jargon, bandwagon, positive connotations and so forth. Todays activity therefore proved that I had fun becasue it was really relaxing and I had a sense of relief taken off my shoulders. Will not write back with mroe of my fun forcing blogs because times up to insert blogs and this assessment is finished!!!!!

BLOG 6- THUSDAY, 16TH SEPTEMBER 2010

Today, in class we had an non-Armbruster class and besides that I have finally decided to carry out my project through a radio station advertisement. I have realised that by doing my task through a radio talk, I would have to have very persuasive language techniques. I would have to have a lot of persuasive techniques as there would not be any images to portray the product. Therefore I would have to also describe and maybe explain the features and what it can do for men/women. Since it was a non-Armbruster class, I could not express my ideas for the assessment task so I have decided to carry on my work as there are only a few days till this task is due. Anyways, gtg and will write back soon with more of my non-Armbruster class blogs!!!!!

BLOG 5- WEDNESDAY, 15TH SEPTEMBER 2010 (NIGHT TIME)

Tonight I have decided to work on my video and final touches. The final touches for my project was to create a full colour A4 print advertisement of oil of olay face creams that would appear in a magazine. I was thinking that maybe I would use instead of the three wise monkeys, I would use the four wise monkeys. This would portray a battle of the senses and the fourth in which is the wisest monkey would be a famous person or celebrity and has the sense for girls by using OLAY. This idea sort of came to me through an epiphany of some type of weird way. I also decided that using emotive language in an advertisement would really grab a males perspective. Will write back soon with more of my weird blogs!!!!!

BLOG 4- WEDNESDAY, 15TH SEPTEMBER 2010

﻿Today in English, was a very hands on and get to the point type of lesson. Today, I had inserted some current advertisements of oil of olay face creams. In doing this I had picked out the type of persuasive language that was used in them. They included, jargons, testimonials and beauty/celebrity. This was a really helpful video as it had given me an idea of how to get males to buy Olay. This also showed that I myself have given in to the types of persuasive languages in which are used in current advertisements. This clearly demonstrates to myslef and others that my video should also include these persuasive techniques in order to have a successfully completed assessment task. Will write back soon!!!!!

BLOG 3- MONDAY, 13TH SEPTEMBER 2010

In English today, I had a very open mind. I needed an open mind as I still had not figured out the actual finishing product, until I had a great idea of and Olay ad that would target males. This would target males through what they believe is attractive when they watch television advertisements. I came to conclusion that I would include the following persuasive language techniques; beauty/celebrity, jargon, slogans/jingles and inter-textual refernces. I found that this is the type of techniocal language to be used as I asked males from outside of school about what makes them want to or be persuaded to buy a product. In today's lesson I had also finished my webspiration task and my 300 word analysis as I worked on it at home aswell. This was a bit challenging as my password or account was not found. Finally it was found and I was relieved that I had fininshed 2 of the 4 parts of the assessment task. Will write back with more of my open mided blogs!!!!!

BLOG 2- FRIDAY, 10TH SEPTEMBER 2010

Today was a very productive and helpful lesson towards our assessment task. In this lesson I started to work on my webspiration task and finish off the process branch. In doing this i had to first create an account. After doing this I had also inserted images of the intended product, just for a feel of how I am going about this task. The last productive activity in which I have almost completed was the 300 word analysis of a current AD about oil of olay face creams. This was actually really easy as the previous english lesson told my class and I all about the TEEL structure for this explanation. Will write back with more of my interesting blogs!!!!!

<span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">BLOG 1- THURSDAY, 9TH SEPTEMBER 2010

<span style="background-color: #c0c0c0; color: #8316c5; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Today in English, we started to work on the proper way to write a TEEL paragraph structure. We had done this due to the fact that majority of 10.1 did not do this to a satisfactory level in previous assessment tasks. In doing this, she emphasised that we were supposed to use this paragraph structure for the different language and visual techniques that were portrayed in the advertisement. She used the language technique 'JARGON', as it talked about 'SPF' and 'UVA'. This was explained to us as the language is used as if everyone understands what the ad is talking about, but no one really understands it. Therefore, making it technical language or a jargon and it helped us understand the different language techniques and when it should be used. Will write back with more of my jargon type blogs!!!!!